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biggunn01
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this is an ad i'm doing for the next issue of manhattan projects presents. comments welcome. enjoy
wes
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BooMSticK
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| Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2001 2:13 am |
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Why hasn't anyone posted reply to this one???
Gun - this is very neat. Good use of blacks. Everything is nicely seperated... very nice...
A few ideas. It's a quite graphic approach which is why I think the water isn't workin'. To many confusing lines. Also your anatomy is weak in a few places. Especially the hands stand out to me. Not even graphical approach can hide weak anatomy...
keep it up
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| Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2001 2:37 am |
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the black areas realy make the picture. i have some issues with the proportion and the fingers but the shading is very good and make up for it. the water looks great in the FG but when they get further away it starts to look like meaningless lines.
i'd get the entire sentence on the same hight and... that's it. i am not sure what i think of the faces on the sides... ;P
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biggunn01
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| Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2001 7:01 am |
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thanks for the comments guys. i'll be the first one to tell you my anatomy is weak. i've just enrolled in an anatomy class at the art students league,nyc. i understand about the water, if i get the time i'll make some changes and post it again. any other comments?
wes
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biggunn01
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| Posted: Thu Feb 22, 2001 9:14 am |
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no one has any comments? how am i supposed to know what's wrong or right with my piece if no one says anything?
wes
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biggunn01
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| Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2001 1:32 pm |
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we're still waiting for a few artist to finish. i'm not sure when it's comming out now. and no that's not a smily face on his head.
wes
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