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Ahcri
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 22, 2001 5:46 pm     Reply with quote


This is my older piece, but lately I'm working on similar things. Any comments are welcome.

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 22, 2001 5:57 pm     Reply with quote
this is really good, a bit blured however, i would keep a bit of the image sharp to attract interest, ive visited your website, ... some really goood work! very abstract while also being interesting.. (im not too intelectual on the subject of fine art ( by which i catergorise your work) , but i find your work very exciting!)

any spelling mistakes = my stupidity



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PostPosted: Thu Feb 22, 2001 6:32 pm     Reply with quote
What the Hell?

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 22, 2001 7:18 pm     Reply with quote
I don't blame ya, I can't explain what this is either.

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 22, 2001 8:40 pm     Reply with quote
Wow! It's red... and.. blurry...

Uhm. It lacks a center of focus. And your eyes just sort of wander all over the image. Something abstract like this really needs to have a strong composition, in addition to whatever cool-looking effects you can come up with.

(looking at your site... is this digital, or a photo of something you painted? I guess that would explain the blurriness.)
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 22, 2001 9:07 pm     Reply with quote
It's originally a scanned drawing on a piece of printer paper. I modified this 7 months later with Photoshop, at the time I was addicted to motion blur filter, so I'm sorry..

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