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Blade member
Member # Joined: 23 Nov 2000 Posts: 85
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Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2001 4:57 pm |
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Well I did this about a month or so ago. This took me about 1.5-2 hours to do. This is as good as I could do it then, and I didn't want to post this here but I decided to suck it up and post because you can only help me. Spare me no remorse when c&cing me!
well enough of me here it is *gulp*
oh before you tell me that the ear on the right isn't right, well it is, I had surgery on my ear and ...well its a long story, don't worry about it, just need to know the ear looks like that. Dammit and I forgot to mention that the line on my forhead is a scar from childhood stupidity.
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Periadam member
Member # Joined: 10 Nov 2000 Posts: 254 Location: Sackville, NB. Canada.
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Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2001 5:07 pm |
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the pic's not bad, but the first thing I noticed is that the eyes (apart from being different sizes) look somewhat lifeless. I suggest adding more shadows around them, cuz eyes aren't flat, ya know .
Scar tissue also tends to be lighter than normal skin (in my experience anyhow) so I dunno if that's true in your case, but it seems weird to me on your portrait.
the mouth looks a titch small, but that could be due to expression.
the shading is kind of flat all over.
the chin looks too big on the left (our left)
I hope I've helped.
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Strawberrysauce member
Member # Joined: 04 Feb 2001 Posts: 356
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Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2001 5:27 pm |
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hey definitely include more shadows and highlights, think more of the overall pic rather than just the line drawing..
keep it up!!
cheers,
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daz199 member
Member # Joined: 30 Dec 1999 Posts: 415 Location: Surrey, BC, Canada
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Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2001 10:44 pm |
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whatta giant gash in ur head
ouch |
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