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Blade
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 20, 2001 4:57 pm     Reply with quote
Well I did this about a month or so ago. This took me about 1.5-2 hours to do. This is as good as I could do it then, and I didn't want to post this here but I decided to suck it up and post because you can only help me. Spare me no remorse when c&cing me!
well enough of me here it is *gulp*


oh before you tell me that the ear on the right isn't right, well it is, I had surgery on my ear and ...well its a long story, don't worry about it, just need to know the ear looks like that. Dammit and I forgot to mention that the line on my forhead is a scar from childhood stupidity.



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Periadam
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Location: Sackville, NB. Canada.

PostPosted: Tue Feb 20, 2001 5:07 pm     Reply with quote
the pic's not bad, but the first thing I noticed is that the eyes (apart from being different sizes) look somewhat lifeless. I suggest adding more shadows around them, cuz eyes aren't flat, ya know .

Scar tissue also tends to be lighter than normal skin (in my experience anyhow) so I dunno if that's true in your case, but it seems weird to me on your portrait.

the mouth looks a titch small, but that could be due to expression.

the shading is kind of flat all over.

the chin looks too big on the left (our left)

I hope I've helped.

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Strawberrysauce
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 20, 2001 5:27 pm     Reply with quote
hey definitely include more shadows and highlights, think more of the overall pic rather than just the line drawing..

keep it up!!

cheers,

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daz199
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 20, 2001 10:44 pm     Reply with quote
whatta giant gash in ur head
ouch
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