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br0un0
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 Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2001 5:47 am |
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This was made for the cover of a mixtape for a french hiphop dj, since he doesn't want his face to appear anymore i'm working on another drawing, anyway tell me what you think, as i'm not very pleased with it i'd like you to comment on it.
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Gordillo
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| Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2001 2:46 pm |
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Cool!! .Only a couple of suggestions,try to add some volume to the background pipes(looks a bit flat)and the fire don,t looks like fire....the rest it�s o.k for me 
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WICKED
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| Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2001 2:50 pm |
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dunno i think its lacking in shadows and highlights. The text looks a little blurry and hard to read. Some color wouldnt be bad either since theres usually lots of lights in clubs and stuff but its not required. I think when higlighted it will look better.
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