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Topic : "Colored line art - Buzz Lightyear from Toy Story" |
scarknee junior member
Member # Joined: 03 Dec 2000 Posts: 2 Location: Vancouver, Canada
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Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2001 2:38 pm |
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Hi,
This is only my second post, still learning but thought I'd see if anybody has any crits on this.
Here is the line art:
Here is my colored version:
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Akolyte member
Member # Joined: 12 Sep 2000 Posts: 722 Location: NY/RSAD
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Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2001 8:35 pm |
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Thats a very clean and crisp render, good...but, try working on lighting, there aren't any contrasting darker/lighter areas that make this type of thing look like it has depth. |
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mantis member
Member # Joined: 03 Jun 2000 Posts: 359 Location: NJ/USA
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Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2001 4:48 am |
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The pic is good but needs some work. I don't know how to express this but basically it needs to be more 'shinier'. Apply more color dodge, and more depth and shadows. |
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Evon junior member
Member # Joined: 19 Feb 2001 Posts: 26 Location: Singapore
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Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2001 11:49 am |
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very good line work. ^_~) Myabe should try to have more tonings/shadings to show the depth of buzzlightyear. ^_^ would be nice if have background too. Keep it up! It's great!
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