Sijun Forums :: View topic - still waters run deep [img, crit !!!!!!!!]

the Sleech · Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2001 5:08 am

http://www.sunpoint.net/~sleech/sammakko.jpg

...and another newbie...hope this works(??)
I did this recently, using only a mouse:/ the man is looking calm and peaceful, as were my feelings since a brand new wacom is on the way to my desktop

I can't wait!!! I should get it next week...
please, please tell me what you think of this. critique is most welcome.

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the_monkey · Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2001 1:29 pm

very nice indeed, since the face is so yellow, try a differnt tone background..or not, i think it looks very pretty indeed.

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Mr.Kh · Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2001 6:40 pm

His top lip looks maybe a little too flat.. and umm... the right side of his face by the eye looks a bit squished, just look at the size of both eyes and eyebrows. Overall the shading is pretty good, but again on his right side the shadow by the cheekbone is too rounded, it makes his cheek look alot 'fatter' than his nose and other features.

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the Sleech · Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2001 12:13 am

Does everyone have nothing at all to comment this pic??? come on, people!
can you even see the pic at all?

topeira · Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2001 6:53 am

very nice

i guess it's painter?

ok, my crit (as u asked)-
1) there is a thick dark contour line the right side of the face. u don't need it.
2)i like the fact that he is not that beutiful. so the cheek is abit round- i think that makes him more human. realistic.
3)the ear doesn't look realistic. this is not the accurate, if it matters to u
4)the hair is less detailed than the face thus make it look wierd. maybe u can add the hair roots. add more highlights to it to make it look in the same detail level as the rest of the face

besides that it looks very very pretty.

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Ian · Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2001 6:57 am

You did great work man. Really this is a very nice calm and peacefull piece of artwork. I really like it. Great work man.

-Ian

the Sleech · Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2001 7:12 am

It's all Photoshop, someone asked about it.
I made a corrected version but I'm too
lazy to post it here...duh.
I'll post some more pics later if you guys like.
and by the way, it took only about 30mins

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