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TheNexx member
Member # Joined: 22 Dec 2000 Posts: 128 Location: Lompoc,CA,US
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 12:10 am |
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This was done using this as a reference
Crits and coment are welcome
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Dennis Sedov |
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ReSistanZ member
Member # Joined: 18 Dec 2000 Posts: 207 Location: Hoorn NH, The Netherlands
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 4:35 am |
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Very nice! I think the air above the volcano is always filled with smoke etc. and you have almost left it empty (I'm exaggerating). That's the only critic. Love it, keep it up! |
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TheNexx member
Member # Joined: 22 Dec 2000 Posts: 128 Location: Lompoc,CA,US
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 2:05 pm |
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BTW, what do you think about rivers, do they look real enough?
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Dennis Sedov |
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Member # Joined: 09 Jan 2001 Posts: 194 Location: Wilmington, DE USA
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 8:18 pm |
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I thought the rivers, especially the one in the middle, was just steam rising up. That might work even better since it looks like a baron dry land. |
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Guy member
Member # Joined: 29 Feb 2000 Posts: 602 Location: British Columbia, Canada
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 9:02 pm |
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the river on the right looks alright, but maybe it should be a bit wider at the bottom and get thinner as it goes off further into the distance.. the middle one seems to have some issues though. cant quite place it though :\ just doesnt seem right. thats all i can say. sorry
good job though. you did capture the smoke very nicely  |
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Member # Joined: 22 Dec 2000 Posts: 128 Location: Lompoc,CA,US
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 11:11 pm |
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When I was painting I didn't think about where those rivers were flowing )) its funny )
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Member # Joined: 22 Dec 2000 Posts: 128 Location: Lompoc,CA,US
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Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2001 12:11 am |
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Thanks. That's my first succesfull painting
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