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Author   Topic : "Volcano, from matte by Craig Mullins"
TheNexx
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 12:10 am     Reply with quote
This was done using this as a reference



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PostPosted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 4:35 am     Reply with quote
Very nice! I think the air above the volcano is always filled with smoke etc. and you have almost left it empty (I'm exaggerating). That's the only critic. Love it, keep it up!
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 2:05 pm     Reply with quote
BTW, what do you think about rivers, do they look real enough?

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 8:18 pm     Reply with quote
I thought the rivers, especially the one in the middle, was just steam rising up. That might work even better since it looks like a baron dry land.
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 9:02 pm     Reply with quote
the river on the right looks alright, but maybe it should be a bit wider at the bottom and get thinner as it goes off further into the distance.. the middle one seems to have some issues though. cant quite place it though :\ just doesnt seem right. thats all i can say. sorry

good job though. you did capture the smoke very nicely
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 11:11 pm     Reply with quote
When I was painting I didn't think about where those rivers were flowing )) its funny )

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 13, 2001 12:11 am     Reply with quote
Thanks. That's my first succesfull painting

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