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TheNexx
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 Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2001 2:33 am |
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15min or so. To tell the truth this my first image done in "spooggy" style. My website is proof for that
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TheNexx
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| Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2001 12:31 am |
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I know I have to come up with something greater to get your attention, but some coments would be neat 
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Imhotep
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| Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2001 12:59 am |
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I like it, very subtle.
The top of the boat is a little fuzzy. And whats "spoogy style."
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Liquid!
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| Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2001 1:17 am |
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Nex -
I think it looks good, but it seems a bit blurry. Also the boat and the pier are in different perspectives. The pier is a downshot, whereas the boat is not quite as extreme. Lastly, Spooge is able to hint at many things quite roughly, because underneath it all, he really understands the forms and shapes of those objects. The boat you drew seems a bit unsure. I would get reference, even if you plan on being sketchy, but what details are left out is almost as important which ones you put in. The easiest way to do that is to check out some pictures of the real thing...
Hope that helps.
-c
EDIT - Here's sort of what I mean - but I didn't take my own advice and referenced the boat, so its pretty pathetic. For that matter I may have screwed up the perspective too... Hope its sort of useful
[This message has been edited by Liquid! (edited February 11, 2001).] |
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