Sijun Forums :: View topic - Illyanna

nova · Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2001 7:26 pm

Well, this is the model I worked on all last semester in Visual Communications at school.. I worked in A:M (Animation Master). This semester I may animate her, but chances are not. There are a lot of things wrong, but give me a break, it's my first try at human modelling

Any critiques/comments for this foul attempt are welcome.

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-nova

[This message has been edited by Nova (edited February 05, 2001).]

Periadam · Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2001 7:42 pm

I'd hardly call it foul! I like her.

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Bubonic · Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2001 7:49 pm

i really like the painting of her, but her body looks a lil bit too boxy

Rossimo · Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2001 7:50 pm

The arms look way too short in that perspective picture.

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daz199 · Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2001 8:18 pm

sweeet
the arms look to skinny and short tho.....

BakaSan · Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2001 11:15 pm

I agrea thate there are some broblems, such as the arms, but it is very good for your first human

Nick2k · Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2001 5:49 am

wow great modeling and a great little character. I agree about the arms though they are a bit too short, anyway alot of people in this forum prefer 2d artwork so you might not get that much in the form of crit in your 3d work.

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ArtKeo · member Member # Joined: 29 Feb 2000 Posts: 115

The arms on the last one look too thin and small.

She looks cute and I like your painting of her.

What is her ethnicity?

nova · Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2001 8:52 pm

I appreciate the replies, guys!

Per: hey, thanks

Bubonic: umm.. genetics perhaps? hehe j/k

Rossimo:

non-from image just for you.. but yeah, she is a little deformed. When i again have access to the software and the model, I'll make that change.

daz: i'll fix that, thanks

bak: *nod* shmanks.. but neh, wasn't too pleased. could've spent a little more time fixing proportions.

nic: *nod* *nod* *shrug* yep, i haven't (almost) finished anything in 3D for a long time, and i almost always work on things like this at school.

art: considered. thanks! ethnicity? well, she's from my own fantasy world, a world i've been thinking of for a while. So i'm not sure.. polish influenced i think(?)

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Akolyte · Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2001 8:18 pm

Drop the neck a 'lil and stretch the legs out a bit and she'll look less stocky.