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BigDumbFace
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 06, 2001 11:37 pm     Reply with quote
Hey, I found the little guy on a site and i really wanted to color him in. If you drew him, props to you... tell me how i can colot this better or what i should add, dont forget iam still a begginer....



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Collosimo
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 06, 2001 11:52 pm     Reply with quote
Good job. Thats a nice first try.

Your colouring is pretty good, but a little flat. You need to define your light soure a bit better. Eg. make highlights and shadows contrasty. There needs to be more definiton between the two. This will help to illustrate the fact that he is a 3d form. So you need some darker shadows on him to help this. I am overall a little confused as to where the light is coming from. If the moon is lighting the character, then it wouldn't light up the front of him. Maybe you have another light source though?

Nice start. Kepp going with it.

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BigDumbFace
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 07, 2001 2:19 pm     Reply with quote
Yeah that's true, i was looking at the light and it doesn't fit. Thanks for the tips
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