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kaosAD
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 05, 2001 2:48 am     Reply with quote
OK, so i took a photo when on an island called HolyIsland, it is in a lake in Ireland called Lough Dearg....
This will be printed at 23inches by 16inches...
What do you think of it???



cheers...

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 05, 2001 3:23 am     Reply with quote
here is the image that istarted with....
The creation process of this image will be explained on my site soon, hopefully by the end of the day!!!


http://www.geocities.com/ahartrey2000/main.htm

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 05, 2001 8:17 am     Reply with quote
is there anyway to edit the topic you give your post??

I think mine loooks like it is supposed to be saying holy islam, where it is actually supposed to be saying holy island....

cheers,

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 05, 2001 9:19 am     Reply with quote
i don't want to piss anybody off, but is there a reason why no body is replying to this.. if it is crap tell me, if it because it is 3d tell me.... sorry but just wanting some crits from excellent artists that loiter this den of artistic talent...
Cheers,

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 05, 2001 9:36 am     Reply with quote
I think it looks cool....
Like that slimy tree...

And that planet in the bg.... That's a pic to i guess....

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 05, 2001 9:42 am     Reply with quote
That's a great photograph you've taken, and IMO some decent 3D work (I've never done any 3D stuff in my life). The actual piece is a bit confusing to look at, but I like the idea and the color scheme. I hope somebody with a some experience with 3D rendering (i.e. not me) will give you some crits and tips. Cheers!

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 05, 2001 10:09 am     Reply with quote
wow its amaing wat ya can do with a plain picture


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PostPosted: Mon Feb 05, 2001 11:34 am     Reply with quote
That is really cool - I would love to go there (either picture). Those are some big mushrooms... lol
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 05, 2001 11:45 am     Reply with quote
awesome pic...
One thing it does need in order to give a true photographic feel though is a point of focus (if you're going for a photographic feel). As it is right now the forground and the background is all in focus. I'm not sure what 3d progam you were using, but many of them do have a way to do this.

Anyway, like I said it's already an awesome pic and good luck to you.

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 05, 2001 5:32 pm     Reply with quote
creates a very nice mood, your image. but too easy to recognize, is the 3d.
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 05, 2001 6:27 pm     Reply with quote
Well i've done some 3d, and i have some ideas you should do..

First of all you should turn the ambient light lower (in 5-15%), create spot light coming there where the moon is, pick some light blue color, use same lighten color with the fog and make the fog more "invisible".

If you have photoshop:
Make a new layer, darken the front of the house and the high light on the roof with, choosing paint brush, picking black color, painting over the house and changing the opasity of the layer.
Make another layer, copy the center of the pipe and move it to left side, paint the center of the pipe with the same dark color like the left of the pipe was..
..Are you still awake?..
Use some color, what fits with the moon, to light/color the right side and the left edge of the pipe.

It's just an suggestion.. try it out if it works.. B)

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 05, 2001 7:52 pm     Reply with quote

Not.. not sure how you did it. It *does* seem hard to get any crits here any more. I wouldnt take it personal.

Anyway, its not bad but I would avoid the extreme white. It kills the form. Try to make the picture pleasing too look as a whole instead of rendering cool looking stuff.
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 06, 2001 12:16 am     Reply with quote
cheers, i'll try and work on all the suggestions... thanx people...


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