[klaivu]

2 hrs worth of fun. got bored, so i decided it was finished and posted it. I hope you'll excuse me for such a cheapo background.

[This message has been edited by klaivu (edited February 04, 2001).]

[This message has been edited by klaivu (edited February 05, 2001).]

[Dryfire]

hmmmfrom just looking i can tell he's not jewish.... anyway i like the instrament a lot, really cool idea. I would bring down the lightness on the dudes face though, kinda makes it look flat - maybe a background would help too

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[lesssster]

dude did you know he has an uncircumsized penis hanging? and it looks like hes sucking that um thing heheh

[ZenDrag0n]

That's neat, but I think the sight of an uncircumcised penis is alarming to people. They give me the shivers, with those weird evil mojo vibes they give out.

GIVE ME CIRCUMCISION OR GIVE ME DEATH!!!

Heheh Good picture, love the inclusion of the vains on the arm, skinny people have noticable vains, yet artists seem to miss that. His mouth looks odd open like that while playing his flute thing.

[klaivu]

humm. give me circumcision or give me death ?
yikes.

how come its alarming to people ?`
i dont understand.
( sorry if you experienced icky vibes )

[Enayla]

Just checking the forum again before I finally go to sleep.

People, this is ridiculous. The picture is great, what the hell does it matter what his penis looks like?!

Besides, it's more natural this way. Why would a creature that isn't even human bother with such a human nonsensical thing?

Oh, did I say I love the picture? Well, I do. Great, soft colours.


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[Liquid!]

Naked guy blowing a piece of wood... Anyone care to tackle this one? Dr. Freud?

Sorry I couldn't resist. I like the pic, but would define the muscles in the arm a bit more. But I think that's just my personal preference.

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[eetu]

straight out of a fairytale.. somehow Ior Bock -ish ;)

eetu.

[The Incredible MGC]

Absolutely fabulous. One of my favorite things I've seen since I've been here the last few days.

It's so just... BIZARRE. There's a touch of old and new in this and ... the cock I think is quite appropriate.

A very nice piece, I say. (the image as a whole.)

[Bubonic]

Only if that cape would came up a little higher..

[klaivu]

is his penis really the only thing people notice ?

[Fontainne]

Love the picture. just a few suggestions. I play brass/woodwind musical instruments, and am scared at the way this guy has his intrument within his mouth. Its as if he is trying to deepthroat the thing. take a look at how an instrument like this is played (I.E. a clarinet) Emboucher(sp?) is a key factor in create sound from a wind-based instrument.

Try, maybe withdrawing the lower lip and extending the upper lip. Reference is the best solvant to this, miniscule problem, otherwise wonderfully rendered piece.

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[SlightlyTwisted]

Personally, I see an unchopped penis every morning and night, and sometimes during the day, and you know what? You guys don't know what you're missing.

Besides, he looks like he might be circumcised, with that cape in front of the end, you can't really tell. And if you can, you're being too obsessive.

As for the picture itself, I like it. I like the lack of definition, I like that he isn't built like a brick shithouse. You don't see that often around here.

I think the background is okay, but the pipe thingy maybe looks a little unfinished, compared to the rest... *shrugs*

[Frost]

Huhu, you said Penis!

But seriously Klaivu, that's pretty cool. I like his face, altough his cheeks don't seem to be "blowing"... as a still image, you must make sure that the action is easily decypherable... so bulging up the side of his mouth and cheeks (not the upper cheeks) would be a good thing. Love his hair color too. =) I think his skin could use a few plays with hues, and some saturation could be added to his cloak. Overall, a nice image.. would like to see you work more on it.

And on the note of the lower body, I guess some red-haired pubes might make it a bit more discreet... cause it sort of stands out a little.

Oh, and a slight thing is HIS right pectoral seems to be intruding into his shoulder territory... hope you see what I mean.

Cheers Klai. =)

[klaivu]

Thanks for compliments & crits everyone.
I suppose i *could* add a background, but being the lazy bastard i am ..

Enayla : Thanks for saying that.
Fontainne : Did what you asked. I suppose its better now : his not blowing it anymore, but blowing it ahm.. nevermind.
Frost : Maybe i'll work on it sometime. Cheers