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Superbug · Posted: Sat Feb 03, 2001 4:46 pm

I haven't been here in ages!! TOo much school. I hope no one forgot who i was!

I managed to muster this up. Just a character sketch i did in math which I colored is PS.

Zor · Posted: Sat Feb 03, 2001 4:53 pm

Real nice image... very cool love this style.. but the top of the head seems to big.. lower the hairline and the top of the head.. and the picture will be A1 Perfect... also I really liked the idea of those paper lines to be there too.. thought it gace it some life

-zor

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Superbug · Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2001 8:06 am

cool cool. THe paper lines were actually just from the scan. I didn't make em dissapear or anything, just used the scan as it was and started to color

Superbug · Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2001 8:03 pm

Ok, i hate sympathy replies and shit. But seriosly? Does my pictoire suck that bad that u guys dont feel like replying?

Tell me how to be better! *Points fingers* I was once LIKE ALL YOU!

Seph|roth · Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2001 8:57 pm

Hey Superbug,

Something that jumps to my eye is that the nose doesnt seem right...I think it might be kinda crooked..
Also, The hair looks like a solid material here and not like a smooth flowing mass..
It look like its just droping, maybe adding a few curves would help.
Lastly, this one is only my personnal opinion but try adding some darker shades to the skin colors to add some contrast..

Hope this might help

Cheers

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