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Magicman member
Member # Joined: 26 Jan 2001 Posts: 146 Location: Germany
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Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 7:08 am |
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Hi,
this is my first Picture, i�ve done on the digital way of drawing. How do you think it...?
Your Sincerely Magicman
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A.Buttle member
Member # Joined: 20 Mar 2000 Posts: 1724
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Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 1:19 pm |
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Very stylized.
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Kolt junior member
Member # Joined: 02 Jan 2001 Posts: 42
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Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 3:17 pm |
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looks too smudgy in most areas, other than the eyes and mouth, and that makes it look wierd. try defining it a bit more, and give it some bumps and scratches It's a good pic though, i like the foot in front!
Edit: get rid of the white areas around his arm
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EviLToYLeT member
Member # Joined: 09 Aug 2000 Posts: 1216 Location: CA, USA
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Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 7:44 pm |
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Heh. looked incomplete because of the pants. Well anyway, try not to use the dodge tool for highlights. Just choose a lighter shade of grey and brush it in manually. Looks great though, you may want to add some more of a dance background. |
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Ninja junior member
Member # Joined: 01 Feb 2001 Posts: 25 Location: Sydney Australia
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Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2001 10:31 am |
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Very cool!
Hes pulling of a flare right?
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A.Buttle member
Member # Joined: 20 Mar 2000 Posts: 1724
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Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2001 10:13 pm |
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A lens flare... hyuk hyuk
Sorry, that was idiot humor.
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Magicman member
Member # Joined: 26 Jan 2001 Posts: 146 Location: Germany
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Posted: Sat Feb 03, 2001 9:33 am |
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Hi,
if i use the brush with different colors instead of the burn/dodge tool, the picture would be better?
ok, i try it on my next picture...
Your Sincerley Magicman |
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Dryfire member
Member # Joined: 21 May 2000 Posts: 945 Location: Long Island, NY
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Posted: Sat Feb 03, 2001 10:10 pm |
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Nice, reminds me of this early 90's skateboard game... you got to hit street dancers!
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Shaded member
Member # Joined: 22 Oct 2000 Posts: 413 Location: Toronto
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Posted: Sat Feb 03, 2001 10:47 pm |
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Those are some red, red lips he got.
Lipstick?
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+ his face looks like its pressed against glass.
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