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Magicman
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 7:08 am     Reply with quote
Hi,

this is my first Picture, i�ve done on the digital way of drawing. How do you think it...?

Your Sincerely Magicman

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A.Buttle
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 1:19 pm     Reply with quote
Very stylized.

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Kolt
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 3:17 pm     Reply with quote
looks too smudgy in most areas, other than the eyes and mouth, and that makes it look wierd. try defining it a bit more, and give it some bumps and scratches It's a good pic though, i like the foot in front!

Edit: get rid of the white areas around his arm

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EviLToYLeT
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 7:44 pm     Reply with quote
Heh. looked incomplete because of the pants. Well anyway, try not to use the dodge tool for highlights. Just choose a lighter shade of grey and brush it in manually. Looks great though, you may want to add some more of a dance background.
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Ninja
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 01, 2001 10:31 am     Reply with quote
Very cool!

Hes pulling of a flare right?

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A.Buttle
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 01, 2001 10:13 pm     Reply with quote
A lens flare... hyuk hyuk

Sorry, that was idiot humor.

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Magicman
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 03, 2001 9:33 am     Reply with quote
Hi,

if i use the brush with different colors instead of the burn/dodge tool, the picture would be better?

ok, i try it on my next picture...

Your Sincerley Magicman
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 03, 2001 10:10 pm     Reply with quote
Nice, reminds me of this early 90's skateboard game... you got to hit street dancers!

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 03, 2001 10:47 pm     Reply with quote
Those are some red, red lips he got.

Lipstick?

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+ his face looks like its pressed against glass.

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