[Zor]

here is a 3D model chr I made for a high poly seq..rough version of textures shown...

Hope you like her so far.....



-zor


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Why do people always say "YES" when they really mean "NO"?

[Ctrl+Z]

i'd say that she needs a bit wider chest, not brest but chest. or maybe i little wider shoulders?

but very cool.

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[This message has been edited by Ctrl+Z (edited January 30, 2001).]

[Guy]

hey its lookin good man. when you going to ge that thing done?

[Visigoth]

Looks good! Only suggestion I'd have is to make her hips wider, so she's got a few more curves...hehe

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[Giant Hamster]

heh, im gonna crit it all!! muhahaha!

The arms are too long im pretty sure, put her arms down to her sides, they should end only a litte after her pockets.

There is a funny ridge on her pants that makes it look like they are on backwards, like she has flat ass-cheeks on her front.

the bracelets are nice, they will look neat when animated.

her left nostril seems squished...maybe thats just lighting.

not sure what pose you modeled her in, but when modeling; if her arms are up like that you get mesh rips/stretches when you try to put them down into a natural position. fyi hehe...ok.

there is a wave on her knees...maybe they should "wave" the other way so she doesnt look pidgeon kneed

the boots are really great! i like those a lot, but she doesnt have a knot tied on them and you might want to add a bottom brim around them because they looks too short. like on skate shoes, they have that big rubber sole on them with edges and all. just a though.

the rings on her legs dont seem to match up with everything elses lighting...play in the surface editor with it a bit more.

its very nicely layed out, a good size and height. when animated it will look great! its got good texturing too. that always helps.

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[kombosagi]

the good, the bad, and the flat-chested. Nice pic though.

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[Freddio]

I dig the Signature

[ambient-whisper]

looks like a poser model

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signature goes in here right?!...

[Lunatique]

I think the model is fine. What others suggested are personal peferences for their ideal female form. Go with what you think is best. As far as anatomy critiques others made, I have to disagree. I've been studying this stuff for over 15 yrs, and I can tell you that there's nothing anatomically incorrect with your model. The arms are NOt too long. When the arms are at rest hanging down, they should be halfway between your knee and where your crotch ends. The hands, however, might be a little small. Usually, a hand will be about the length of from your chin to the middle of your forehead. I suggest when you read critiques from others, first check out their website/work and see if they are qualified to give any. Not to belittle anyone, but there are quite a few young teenagers here giving critique that's way off base. But, this place is all about sharing opinions. Just be careful who you listen to.

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[Zor]

Deep! - but I appricate all your comments, I did personally think that the arms were ok, so was supprised to here that one, (once attacthed a skelton I'll put her in a pose)

I understand about people offering inccorect advise, Art is Art after all and there are many ways to visualy see its tru art form. I use eveyones feedback as a guidline. if one or more people say the same thing then so be it.. somtines they do offer great notes, but othertimes, well lets say people tend to be a bit ignorant to the principles of basic Art.

Oh and as for the checking of websites, I agree to this on some cases but somtimes not..see my website has not been updated in Years (so None of my good or recent work is on it) but more to the point, Art again is a representation of real life or your imagination and, well, somtimes people cannot actully Do what they want.. but can visually see it but has the knowledge, that is possible too..

Cheers

-zor

[steone]

hmmm, made with poser 4?

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[Zor]

Poser 4 I have never used.. This was done all In max. apart from textures... why do suggest Poser??

2 people here have said that so now im curious

[Ben Barker]

It just looks like a Poser model. They're usually really skinny and have a very unique face that screams Poser.
I almost said the same thing until I looked a little closer.

[steone]

oke, it`s look good, but the torus, ankle socks and the photoshop smudgetool made bobble not lookgood and use more light!

sorry mi englis is bad!

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[Cuddly]

Greets,

nice model. On first glance, though, it would seem that her knees (or at least the one on the right with the more defined fold/crease where the knee looks to be) is a bit too far down the leg. The upper leg/femur area looks a tad too long compared to the lower leg/tibia+fibula area.

Hope I used the right bone names...

[Shadowman]

Looks like poser to me.
Even if you didn't do this in poser I think it would be a mistake to make a model that resembled those models ever a little bit. Every one will think you are a fake.