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PostPosted: Tue Jan 30, 2001 10:14 am     Reply with quote
Originally this supposed to be just an example for Tinusch, but it turned out so... inspiring that I decided to finish it. And critique is accepted, too.



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PostPosted: Tue Jan 30, 2001 10:18 am     Reply with quote
wowie zowie! dude the lighting and everything on the lower portion is so effective and I don't even know what to say really except there's something bothering me about the top portion. I don't have enough time right now to figure out what, though hehehe

don't stop making stuff




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PostPosted: Tue Jan 30, 2001 10:35 am     Reply with quote
Man! That's awesome! Were you the one who retreated for some time from the board to study art? If so... man... *lost words*

Is that part of your new secret project?

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 30, 2001 10:37 am     Reply with quote
What exactly did you want to show to Tinusch?

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 30, 2001 10:40 am     Reply with quote
helei ! mainio !

that castle's bothering me though. it should be tilted to the right, as the image has a slightly tilted camera angle. fixit doggonit ! it reeeally bothers me, and this image.
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 30, 2001 10:44 am     Reply with quote
sw33t ,
the lighting is amazing.

I agree with synj the top part looks loose from the whole picture like its not supposed to go/be there mabye the sense of scale isn't there / correct ?

.: | v151 Ary | :.

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 30, 2001 11:32 am     Reply with quote
synj, you can be sure that I won't stop. Thanks.

S4Sb, this isn't part of my top ... project. Thanks.

klaivu, kuvassa olevat virheet johtuvat siit� ett� olen t�ll� hetkell� tavallista sairaampi, kuumetta Kiitos.

v1510nAry, thanks.



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PostPosted: Tue Jan 30, 2001 2:00 pm     Reply with quote
Neat stuff, it has great mood!

Thanks for the post...

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 12:06 am     Reply with quote
Looks very very nice...maybe some "lurking eye�s" in by the tree�s would be good? but i think it�s nice just the way it is now also

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 12:21 am     Reply with quote
GRID, thanks. I will try if I have enough spare time...


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PostPosted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 12:23 am     Reply with quote
Nice. That rocks. Looks a lot better than mine did...
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 12:28 am     Reply with quote
bg : ei se mit��n, korjaa vaan ...
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 12:34 am     Reply with quote
Tinusch, atleast yours was very inspiring thanks.

klaivu, viitsitk� n�ytt�� miten tuo linna korjataan, p�� r�j�ht�� jos yrit�n itse mietti� sit�

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 12:43 am     Reply with quote
eheh... at least you answered one of my questions

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 12:45 am     Reply with quote
I will answer the other on synj's group drawing board

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 4:44 am     Reply with quote
I tried to fix the castle...

Gambit, thanks.

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 8:13 am     Reply with quote
Niinkuin muut sanoivat. Lis�ksi ehdotus linnaan: laske sit� alemmas tms, nyt on liikaa tyhj�� keskell� tai liian v�h�n tilaa linnan p��ll�.

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 8:20 am     Reply with quote
Very very nice. I like it alot and i think it would suit a childrens book
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 11:28 am     Reply with quote
Affected: oikeassa olet, pit��pi kokeilla. kiitos.

Thanks Micke.

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 4:13 pm     Reply with quote
hihii it really screams "story" :)

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 4:30 pm     Reply with quote
That is cool.

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 01, 2001 1:41 am     Reply with quote
eetu, neebhore: Thanks.

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