[Psionic]

This is a pic that Loki from Digital Evolution pencilled and I painted up in PS with a mouse, took about 12 hours, hope ya like it!


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[el tigre]

I like it, but it seems a bit shiny, too many bright spots IMHO.

If you look at it with your eyes half-closed and out of focus the pic totally loses it's form. Try to darken the background and separate it from the characters. Try also to render the characters as a whole rather than the individual muscles.

Hope this helps, re-post I'd like to see it.

:�

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Couldnae hit a coo in the arse wi a banjo if uh wis huddin it by the tail. :�

[Psionic]

The bright spots are from lasers and lights etc , but I see your point, I was going for bright 'n' sparkly. I dont really wanna darken the background (even tho' it would make 'em stand out more) because I wanted atmosphere, lights, colours, confusion, etc, kinda hard on the eyes thanks for your comments tho'

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[Psionic]

Anybody else?

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[aNoah]

It's cool, but it's not my style.

[Psionic]

Fair enuff!!!! its mine

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[ArtKeo]

Would you consider doing this picture in an anime 'cell painting' style later and see how it compares to the current one?


I think your coloring with a mouse is exceptionaly good.

[Psionic]

Sorry m8, this is how I saw it and this is how I painted it, I like Anime stuff but have never really tried that style, mmmmmm its a good idea tho' maybe I will my influences are from Graffiti so I guess thats how I paint

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[Jucas]

Good technique, but it makes my eyes sore. How about toning down the background? Perhaps adding a pyrimid and/or dunes.
Right now it seems so busy and the characters don't stand out very much as is.

Tea for two and two for tea,
-jonathan


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`What sort of people live about here?' asked Alice.

`In that direction,' the Cat said, waving its right paw round, `lives a Hatter: and in that direction,' waving the other paw, `lives a March Hare. Visit either you like: they're both mad.'

`But I don't want to go among mad people,' Alice remarked.

`Oh, you can't help that,' said the Cat: `we're all mad here. I'm mad. You're mad...'

[Psionic]

The theme is an Underground Party (no room 4 pyramids sorry ) thats why its bright and shiney and confusing and lots of bright colours.......

Thanks for your comments tho' I get your point

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[Matt Elder]

G'day Psionic, always love having a little look at your work as you style with colours is just a little different from most. I really like the background and the female is coloured quite well. The thing that jumps out at me is that the colouring looks a little blurry and needs to be a little bit sharper. I also think there is just way too much happening with the colours on the guys skin. They just seem a little random, could be sharper and possibly use colours that compliment one another a little bit. At the moment they seem a little hard on the eye. Still a nice job

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See ya on da flip side
Matt
http://www.mattelder.com

[Psionic]

Thanks for the crit, but its a disco, loads of crazy coloured lights and confusion, thats why I have used crazy shading and tints and too much going on to give that rave/party feeling.

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[Psionic]

Anybody else?

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[Beardy]

You smell like fairy liquid!

Curse those new bottles!!!!! How can Blue Peter ever be the same???!!!