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detonation2000 · Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2001 2:01 pm

Much like a billion other people I dont upload much because I dont get a chance to draw enough.

I would like to eventually turn this picture into a painting so please crit.

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detonation2000 · Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2001 4:39 pm

hmmmmmmmmmm.......

no one wants to critique?

This is one of my favorite pieces I've done so far and I really would like someone to give me a bit of a critique on maybe how to make the atmosphere better or something.

any takers?

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As soon as your born you start dying,
so you might as well have a good time.
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Jezebel · Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2001 4:49 pm

detonation2000: It's only been two hours since you first posted, settle down

I think this is a cute image but I don't really care for the corner drawn in the back. And his eye on our right looks a little bulged out... kinda scary

This might look cool if you tinkered around with the design in a vector art program or something.

-Beth

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Dan · Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2001 6:52 pm

looks like those little critters from Princess Mononoke.

detonation2000 · Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2001 8:07 pm

hehehe.

I thought it was more of Tim Burton's Stain Boy.