[A.Buttle]

Looks a little too much like a metal t-shirt for my tastes. Maybe putting the round face thing over the sternum on the front of the t-shirt with sedative.org and "death to corporate design" high on the shoulders on the back of the t-shirt.

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Joe Dillingham
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[Spitfire]

The whole point was to make it look like a cliche metal shirt =]

I've tried the face-on-front thing but it lacks impact there. back is nicer.

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I am but a statue, impervious to love.

[shardik]

the images are a bit too big on the tshirt

[Spitfire]

Okay i've been collecting opinions and there is a moderate interest in sedative.org shirts (yeah i know, who the fuck would want to wear one?) so i crawled behind my pc and this is half of what i came up with, the evil variant :



I dont ask if anyone would like to wear one of these fuckers, just if you have ideas/suggestions for the positioning of elements or even other elements.


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I am but a statue, impervious to love.

[Spitfire]

Oh the other one is a superstylish ash-grey or sand colored one with a high nu-design factor but its not done yet.



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I am but a statue, impervious to love.

[el tigre]

Kinda Smashing Pumpkins. You've said thats what ya want though. Whattabout enlarging the cherub, putting him on the front with sedative.org in black through the picture.

I dunno, I kinda feel its missing something but I dunno what

I'll tell you if I work it out.

abientot my merlin-engined friend!

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Couldnae hit a coo in the arse wi a banjo if uh wis huddin it by the tail. :�

[Enayla]

Hey Spitfire.

I think I like the second one better actually - looks pretty neat.

I'd move the symbol down slightly though, so it's not positioned so high up

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[SlightlyTwisted]

I have to agree with Enayla, I love the bottom one. I'd leave the cherub where he is, though. I think it's the writing at the bottom that needs moving. It's too low down. If you wore it tucked in, it would completely vanish into the dark unknown...

[el tigre]

they're not really the kind of t-shirts you wear tucked in though.

well I wouldn't.

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Couldnae hit a coo in the arse wi a banjo if uh wis huddin it by the tail. :�

[SlightlyTwisted]

A t-shirt's a t-shirt. How I wear it depends entirely on one thing, and one thing alone. The climate.

[Merekat]

hullo. ;}

Love your type treatment on the front, and I do like the cherub the best as well. My one comment is that it's a little disconnected to the type below it. Perhaps line it around the image, with the word 'death' at the very bottom, and the rest curving up around to the right?

dunno. just a suggestion. ;}

[Spitfire]

Woah! replies!

Umm. i dont know where to start. Im listening to a voicemail by a girl who actually basically more or less is asking me out. Umm. The shirt. Yes. The angel will be much smaller, but not too much. The cherub is about the size of the plate you put a teacup on, and positioned between the shoulder blades. The text still needs work to fit in with the style.

More as soon as ive descrambled my brain.

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I am but a statue, impervious to love.

[Spitfire]

Oh and thanks to all who said Nice Things.



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I am but a statue, impervious to love.