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goofball
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Plz Rate this pic Because I Need Advice!
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cybergod
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| Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2001 7:23 am |
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your picture is very good
its just perfect i like the colors
has i can see ... the colors are very CLEAR
where is pic?
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goofball
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| Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2001 7:31 am |
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quote:
Originally posted by cybergod:
your picture is very good
its just perfect i like the colors
has i can see ... the colors are very CLEAR
where is pic?
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Sorry Forgot to put pic in!  but it;s there now u c ! greetz
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cybergod
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| Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2001 7:35 am |
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ohh sorry...
your picture dont load when i come in to this topic
sorry again
very good picture !!!!
i like it
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OkkE
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| Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2001 7:40 am |
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Heej Goof! Well, like the pic, it's done very well.
C U at school tomorrow!
Greetz,
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Merekat
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| Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2001 9:12 am |
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Welcome, Goofball. ;}
Not a bad coloring job! The one main bit of advice would be that you try to avoid using black to shade your pictures. Black is a very dull and potentially lifeless color---or lack thereof--that will flatten your pics. For example, the shading on the face looks to be grays. I would suggest that in the future you try a nice burnt sienna or a bit of brown-red rust color, but carefully, mind you. Gradually build up the shape of your form. Also, perhaps in the same vein, it would be nice to see some more definition in shading on the neckline.
I see that what is shading the arms is perhaps a deep red, which is good. But there's waaaaayy too much of it, and that's not so good. Your shadows are so harsh, it's hiding a lot of information and it's hurting your character. Make more of a subtle gradation to shade her arm, else, if you wanted a harsh shadow, make sure the rest of the piece agrees with the light source. ;}
I do like your colors. A little bright, but that's okay. Just try to look at more details you could develop into you piece. ;}
Keep up the good work! Post more stuff!
(OH! And -psssst!- you spelled Polykarbon's name wrong!)
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goofball
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| Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2001 9:24 am |
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Well, thanx very much for tha advice and comments!
I'll try to use the advice u gave on my pic i'm coloring now!
And about the original maker of the pic: Sorry if i spelled his name wrong, i'm so sorry! (hope u won't mind)
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| Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2001 11:26 am |
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goofball
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| Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2001 11:40 am |
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Yet an another fine piece of information! thanks Monkey! :P
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goofball
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| Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2001 11:43 am |
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and they say monkey's are less evolved!
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