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Jerry
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This is the finished page of my comic book (Senses of Metals). This is also my first inked picture... crits pls...
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Delucubus
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| Posted: Fri Jan 19, 2001 4:13 pm |
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Hey, ya, i liked what you did with it from the last time i saw this page. It added a lot showing what that glider thing sees in the second and third frame.
He's shooting rockets out of his back to kill the next one right? |
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Jerry
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| Posted: Fri Jan 19, 2001 4:29 pm |
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thanx... yeah he's going to kill the next one. I'm getting Erik (exellent writer) to write the script for me now BTW
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Jerry
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| Posted: Fri Jan 19, 2001 11:22 pm |
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more crits pls...
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TheMilkMan
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| Posted: Sat Jan 20, 2001 12:15 am |
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| Hey it looks a lot better now ....keep going and you might be a pro someday just got to keep it up you will be suprised how fast you get better....!!!!!! |
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Jerry
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| Posted: Sat Jan 20, 2001 1:44 pm |
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thanx... I'll try to get page 2 done as quick and best as possible
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