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micke member
Member # Joined: 19 Jan 2000 Posts: 1666 Location: Oslo/Norway
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Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2001 6:17 pm |
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I really enjoyed doing this one..
I coloured it with colour-pencils and markers
and i tried to exaggerate the same way as Schiele does with his colours especially on skin, making the person look sick or unhealthy. If you look careful on the skin there are areas that are in a totally different tone or colour and that's exactly
the thing that i wanted to try.
-Mikael
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burn0ut member
Member # Joined: 18 Apr 2000 Posts: 1645 Location: california
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Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2001 6:27 pm |
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awesome, i really like experiments with colors, u did a good job!
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Chapel member
Member # Joined: 18 Mar 2000 Posts: 1930
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Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2001 6:30 pm |
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Looks really cool micke. Although I think the blue on the chin and lip look out of place. Is it supposed to be hatching or facial hair? |
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Sergenth member
Member # Joined: 06 Apr 2000 Posts: 437 Location: Milford NJ USA
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Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2001 6:34 pm |
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That's a spiffy rock-star face. Cadaver-tastic! |
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Justin Kramer member
Member # Joined: 03 Nov 2000 Posts: 143 Location: Ithaca, NY
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Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2001 6:59 pm |
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Neat syling, micke. I agree with Chapel that the blue facial hair looks off, but the rest looks great. |
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Bubonic member
Member # Joined: 21 Sep 2000 Posts: 209 Location: Long Island, NY, US
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Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2001 7:03 pm |
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nice job as usual micke.
Im doing my self portrait also, quite a few actually, and i shade with lines like you do, but it still looks sorta flat, any suggestions? |
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ex member
Member # Joined: 23 Mar 2000 Posts: 887 Location: USA
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Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2001 7:04 pm |
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i also agree with chapel, and what's up with his lip? |
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Chapel member
Member # Joined: 18 Mar 2000 Posts: 1930
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Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2001 7:04 pm |
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By the way, I know you can't really remove those marks, but if you wanted to correct it (not saying you have to or are going to) I would go back in with a grey overlapping some strokes and inbetween them. The blue stuff that is.
Also.. just wanted to say this pic reminds me of a police lineup.
[This message has been edited by Chapel (edited January 13, 2001).] |
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Frost member
Member # Joined: 12 Jan 2000 Posts: 2662 Location: Montr�al, Canada
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Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2001 8:06 pm |
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I find the blue stuff cool looking. The line art is damn nice, as usual. (Wish I could draw like that). |
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::Dino:: member
Member # Joined: 09 Sep 2000 Posts: 250 Location: Toronto, ON, Canada
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Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2001 11:00 pm |
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Love it All the features look cut and solid. The droopy eyes are a nice touch too.
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galen member
Member # Joined: 13 Nov 2000 Posts: 172 Location: a computer.
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El Caseron member
Member # Joined: 31 Mar 2000 Posts: 254 Location: Germany near Hamburg
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Posted: Sun Jan 14, 2001 2:54 am |
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Sick! You really achieved your aim.
You going to refine? |
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Jess member
Member # Joined: 12 Jan 2000 Posts: 524 Location: united states
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Posted: Sun Jan 14, 2001 5:16 am |
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Micke, I'm not an art critic but I absolutely LOVE it.  |
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shardik member
Member # Joined: 09 Apr 2000 Posts: 494 Location: Buffalo, NY
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Posted: Sun Jan 14, 2001 9:14 am |
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the purple ears look great
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micke member
Member # Joined: 19 Jan 2000 Posts: 1666 Location: Oslo/Norway
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Posted: Sun Jan 14, 2001 11:31 am |
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Thanks you guys!
chapel/Justin:
Thanks, yeah the blue is a little to intense i guess, but it's no problem to fix it.
I just use Photoshop. I think i'll go for the same colour, but just hatch it in a different way. It was suppose to be facial
hair, by the way. The lip is a little too sharp, so i just smooth it down a bit. Thanks for the help.
Bubonic: I would have to see it in order to
say something about it. Why don't you just post it in a new thread? There is a ton of helpful people here that can help you out
Frost:Thanks, mate Your'e all alone when it comes to liking the blue
El Caseron: Glad to hear that.
No, i'm not gonna refine it. I think it would loose it's purpose that way.
Jess:Thanks
Shardik: maybe i'll paint mine purple
and some blue on my chin..
-Mikael
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micke member
Member # Joined: 19 Jan 2000 Posts: 1666 Location: Oslo/Norway
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Posted: Sun Jan 14, 2001 11:48 am |
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Ok, i've done some changes..
Does it look better?
I toned down the blue a little and hatched it in a different way and smoothed out the edge on the lip.
-Mikael
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S4Sb member
Member # Joined: 13 Jan 2001 Posts: 803 Location: near Hamburg (Germany) | Registered: Mar 2000
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Posted: Mon Jan 15, 2001 12:01 am |
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The fine blue fits it better! It looks more like a beard now. Was that intended?
Like it a lot. Stored
P.S.: Please look the Ole-thread...
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Freddio Administrator
Member # Joined: 29 Dec 1999 Posts: 2078 Location: Australia
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Posted: Mon Jan 15, 2001 5:02 am |
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id say the blue is meant to be stuble...
great pic Micke |
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Chapel member
Member # Joined: 18 Mar 2000 Posts: 1930
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Posted: Mon Jan 15, 2001 7:46 am |
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Looks better micke. |
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micke member
Member # Joined: 19 Jan 2000 Posts: 1666 Location: Oslo/Norway
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Posted: Mon Jan 15, 2001 9:56 am |
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Thanks, Glad to hear that
-Mikael
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