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MrHiemey Guest
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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2001 10:36 pm |
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I made this today since I had a lot of free time. Kinda made it up as I went, but it turned out to be a hitch-hiking girl with a knife. She might make for a good story of something. Anyhow, let me know what you think, I'd like to know what to work on.
thx!!
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Member # Joined: 01 Dec 2000 Posts: 528 Location: NC, USA
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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2001 11:12 pm |
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Sorta neat but looks a little weak. Work on learning the bones and anatomy better mostly.
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shardik member
Member # Joined: 09 Apr 2000 Posts: 494 Location: Buffalo, NY
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Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 12:07 am |
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How does ivey feel about u drawin other girlies??
[fixed it] woop
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Lar/ge junior member
Member # Joined: 07 Jan 2001 Posts: 3 Location: Torrance, CA, USA
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Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 12:11 am |
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Very good, but she looks kinda lean and MEAN, maybe a nice smile... but I like it a
lot just as is, it's .
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Member # Joined: 15 Mar 2000 Posts: 4833 Location: unfortunately, very near you.
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Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 12:23 am |
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if enayla and hiemey are related LIKE THAT, i'll eat my fucking head...
it'be quite odd, rather.
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Flinthawk member
Member # Joined: 14 Oct 2000 Posts: 415 Location: Los Angeles
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Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 1:03 am |
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don't eat your head yet, faust. I think shardik has Enayla and Ivey confused.
As far as the image, I'd have shifted the hips to the left more and the knees look a little too far down the leg to look right even with exaggerated anatomy.
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faustgfx member
Member # Joined: 15 Mar 2000 Posts: 4833 Location: unfortunately, very near you.
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Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 2:52 am |
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though it's a nice drawing.
the knife is disturbing.
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sky high with a heartache of stone you never see me 'cos i'm always alone/ministry
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MrHiemey Guest
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Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 8:01 am |
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yea, you're right Flinthawk, that knee is too low now that i look at it, i wasn't paying to much attention to the drawing while i was drawing, i was just drawing.
(does that make sense? oh well)
you are also right about my relationship status. I'm with Ivey not Enayla.
I'm starting an anatomy class tommorrow, so that should help with my anatomy when i am unconciously drawing. Thanks for the comments though, I'll work on something else today and tommorrow to see if it turns out better than this one.
I fixed the knee, it should look a little more natural now, although overall the image figure is exaggerated.
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Goddess Dezi junior member
Member # Joined: 14 Nov 2000 Posts: 31 Location: Ca
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Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 1:53 pm |
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You need to make her a little less....stiff? She seems to be leaning to the left a bit much, and it makes her look off-balnce. Good work though. |
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Awetopsy member
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Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 2:04 pm |
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EGADS!!!
I actually know someone that looks like that!!
ack! thats scary
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Dryfire member
Member # Joined: 21 May 2000 Posts: 945 Location: Long Island, NY
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Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 3:12 pm |
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arghh... Nice pic! i'd work on the feet a bit more and make the legs a bit shorter and it would look a lot better. but hell, i always like gal's with long legs!
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Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 3:35 pm |
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Heh, study Rubens figures. That are very good and fat. =)
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madregent junior member
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Jenn member
Member # Joined: 25 Jul 2000 Posts: 1055 Location: Melbourne, VIC, OZ
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Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2001 7:33 pm |
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Interesting idea.. tho a hitch hiker chick would most likely be wearing pants or shorts... and shoes.. interesting idea.. im looking to write some short stories so if you want you can get hold of me. All my details are in my profile. Also take a look at your porn mags or yur gf for figure practise. [no offense ment in this one]
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Member # Joined: 23 Aug 2000 Posts: 127 Location: Reading, UK
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Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2001 4:23 pm |
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Hmmmm....as the head part of the image trickled down my modem I thought 'mmm...looks like Alice'. & then I saw the knife. Mmmm...it is Alice. (As in American McGees Alice in Wonderland, for the hard of thinking).
Ahhh well - it looks good anyways. The sole thing I'd pick up on is the strong black line under the chin.
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