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mattready
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 Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2001 8:49 am |
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hey all...this is a new comic that i am coloring for an online comic company....its called MATADOR.
please gimme some feedback on the coloring...
thx
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Get-up Kid
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| Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2001 10:54 am |
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Good job with the actual drawing! It would be easier for people to critique the coloring if the drawing was inked. Right now it looks like it was drawn in colored pencil or something like it.
I think that the smoke coming from the gun is too dominant, and so are the little reflections sparking off the gun.
But try inking and then coloring...the results will be a lot more tight. |
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shardik
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| Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2001 11:05 am |
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it seems a little flat
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[gsn]kore
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| Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2001 11:23 am |
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| very nice, Add more detail to the gun and the sideburns look funny.. not that it is bad or anything |
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mykscholze
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| Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2001 11:29 am |
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Looks good, although I am going to agree with Get-up Kid, about Inking this rendering....it looks like it is still in progress. Also for defining some dimension I would increase the contrast and sharpen some of the lines on your shading.
But that is just my opinion!
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Novacaptain
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| Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2001 6:37 pm |
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| hmm, those sparkles look a bit odd, since the gun isn't too reflective generally. Make it shinier. Also the lower part of the faze looks like it's in profile while the top looks like it's in 1/8 angle. |
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Novacaptain
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| Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2001 6:55 pm |
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| hmm, those sparkles look a bit odd, since the gun isn't too reflective generally. Make it shinier. Also the lower part of the faze looks like it's in profile while the top looks like it's in 1/8 angle. |
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EviLToYLeT
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| Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2001 7:09 pm |
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| Well, like many people said, the coloring job makes the picture look very flat. There's a good number of those books that show the planes on the head and that would greatly help. Also, try not to use dodge and burn but instead picking the colors out manually. Because to be honest, your not getting any practice. If a bright read light source hit the guy, would you still be using dodge and burn? Anyway, it looks great. You may want to try getting rid of one sparkle.. or getting rid of both. |
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johnlynchcole
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| Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2001 9:26 pm |
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Nice One, its ver "Humberto Ramos" Style, i like it a lot, you should ink it, youknow, make it more neat, "Image comics" like, and stuff.... i think it was Eviltoylet who said something about the gun.... well... he�s right... Keep up the good work....
Bythe way, "Matador" thats how we call a Football Team here in Argentina
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