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Loud
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 Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2001 1:36 pm |
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Hey guys, this is my third Wacom image ever, and I'm still learning so if anyone can give me some tips, crits, or warnings of any bad habits please do!
This one took about 3 and a half hours, blah blah blah, *how bout the image eh?*
I have to use tripod for now so I hope it works... if not use this. http://loudplay.tripod.com/temp/IcePlanet-1.jpg
This chick's gonna be in it (Just so ya know, and yes... she is sticking out her lips :P)
I'm gonna have a website for this animation up soon if all goes well... |
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Loud
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| Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2001 1:45 pm |
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Oh and if anyone can be bothered... stop by my website
www.lunatech3d.com
I'm in the middle of making a newer/better version and I'm wondering what you guys think I should should or shouldn't do in the next version.
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[Optima]
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| Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2001 2:21 pm |
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You can probably get more feedback here: http://www.3dsociety.com .
I like the color of the hair.. but I would get rid of the blue highlights on the face. Also the lips look deformend. |
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Loud
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Novacaptain
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| Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2001 9:24 pm |
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nice. The ice formations don't look natural in the sense that they occured naturally but they do look like they're made of ice. I think the size of the craters and mountains on the moon are a bit exaggerated but that is up to you to decide. I like the robot...blue robot mmmm I'll be getting one of those next xmas  |
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Loud
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| Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2001 9:44 pm |
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*Wow a reply*
Yes, it's very unnatural, the idea for this part of the animation is that the planet is composed of some sort of substance, not necessarily water. The core of the planet superheats from pressure and erupts, but it is so cold on the outside of the planet everything freezes instantly.
Possible? Probably not, but it can exist in 3D. (Which also explains the 'moon' in the background) =)
[This message has been edited by Loud (edited January 09, 2001).] |
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redix
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| Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2001 11:29 pm |
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how the fuck did u do that!!
-redix |
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