[Infinity]

Hew inspired me to put a bit more detail into my picturem tnx Hew

here it is


critics welcome

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[El Caseron]

As I said, get yourself some tablet. Now your mech looks very...er.. constructed. Too many straight lines. It looks too linear As if it was zeichnet with Lineal. But I guess that's the problem with mouse drawings.

ein Tablet lohnt sich echt Bei Lidl f�r schon 79,- Ist zwar kein Wacom aber es funktioniert. Red Zack hat sonst noch ein Wacom f�r 130,-

[Infinity]

I worked after a pencil sketch, but yeah it is very linear. But it looked even more linear before.

but I really don't have enough money for a tablet... right now.

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[This message has been edited by Infinity (edited January 06, 2001).]

[Infinity]

more critics?... anyone?

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[hew]

You improved it from last time a good deal, it used to look like lego(leg-oh). Its really good for something done with a mouse , I think. But, there is still problems with the lights, there pointing outwards > < too much, maybe make them more blurry, >0 0< try making them point forward more. Seeing as though , your using a mouse maybe you could try using free-transform(skew) on metal textures and overlaying them on all the flat planes ( if that makes sense). And I dont think the glass should be so blue. But in the end, I dont really know, I'm a newbie too.

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[This message has been edited by hew (edited January 08, 2001).]

[Collosimo]

I would agree with Hew.

The windows are too blue.

Remember..."Every material has a certain level of reflectivity. It then reflects to that level its surrounding environment."

surrounding environment! you see, that means your glass will have some reflections of the land surrounding and the sky. Well all I can say is that from your pic I can tell that the surrounding environment sure as hell isnt that blue!

hope that helps..

/COLLOSIMO

[Infinity]

hew: I made the lights looking like this >< because the perspective is supposed to be looking through the mech from a close distance... but yeah it's too far outwards.

collismo: still learning ... but yeah I gotta need to make reflections.



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