[Periadam]

methinks they look very nice, Axl. But there are some problems with contrast and saturation that bug me about it.

I'm not really sure what that thing on/near the forehead's supposed to be, but it looks like it might be a tattoo of some sort? Anyhow, if it_is_a tattoo, then you should lighten it up and shade it to look like its wrapping around the face. and if it isn't a tatto, then you might want to add a drop shadow or a glow around it to separate it from the face.

the hair should also be lightened up a lot to blend with the face

the eyes are a bit too saturated to blend well with the rest of the pic

also, I think the mouth looks too wide. You might want to change that too.

looks nice though

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Accept that some days you're the pigeon and some days you're the statue.

Peri.

[Isric]

The idea of Tin Gods has a lot of potential. I kinda like reading topic ideas and then drawing what I think I'll see. Thank you!

[Isric]

oh yeah, how rude of me. I really like the smooth, clean look of your coloring, good show

[Axl]

This is something I've been working on lately.

As it is it's finished I like the mix of colour and pencil work but I'm toying with the idea of colouring the other two characters.
Tell me what you think.
Thanks.