[Lajun]

-- a really quick one. I was bored. Used an old 3d concept I made .. modified it some and painted some flames to it. And a basic background.

Enjoy..

Edit: had to change the location.. it was REALLY slow on loading before as you mentioned.




// Lajun
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[This message has been edited by Lajun (edited January 04, 2001).]

[nightmare]

its pretty i like it

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[Wyatt Turner]

Nice.. It seemed to load slow for me. I have high speed internet here. :-/ still it could just be some traffic on the net today.

Nice model.. what did you model in?

y@

[Lajun]

thnx.. It's made in a prog called Cinema 4D XL..by Maxon

// Lajun
// www.le-gfx.com

[natec]

Looks like a good start...the first things I see are...

1. tires...seems like you've made them black, I can't see them at all...play with the material/texture make it more like rubber

2. The logo/chrome trim letter is too thick, try lessening the extrude.

3. Look at the rims and try and blend the shapes into one another a bit more

4. The seams in the body...you should really be able to see the thickness here it will make a huge difference...there should be a dark line where the split occurs and then a bright highlight right next to it.

5. Put a gravel texture on the road...again not pure black...

As an aside...the flames are interesting...kinda "ghosted", I prefer the more graphic outline look, but these are cool in a different way.

Hope this helps a bit...

-nate