[pasakievich]

This is something I am redoing digitally from an oil painting I did last year as part of a class project. Its coming along but I am not sure how to take it further. HELP!




Thanks Much!
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[Ragnarok]

Well... I think it's really well done.
I like the contrast the girl makes, being in sort of b&w and the rest in red variants.
The perspective is good, texture is good.

I'll add detail to grass. Also I find confusing where her legs are... the "blade" she's holding could use a bit more detail, so the graves.

All in all very good. It could be considered done already.

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[pasakievich]

I worked on it some more. Please give me your thoughts.


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[Yanka]

great detail on the tomb stones, but in my opinion the face and skull seems a little too white...
I'll keep an eye on this one *likesit*

[RaykastCS]

im guessin the whitness is intentional... i like it gives a fealing of supernatural insted of moody insain person. some parts of her clothing need to be more shaded such as the area of her right arm. It shoulddnt collect that much red diffution light from its suroundings. think about the figure if that white light wasnt there at all. it wouldnt be a solid red.
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[pasakievich]

Still in progress, keep your thoughts coming!


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[tilokani]

I sit here,
in my chair,
make this rhyme,
i have the time.

I see this pic,
my lips i lick,
it's just too sweet,
my favourite treat.

Just too damn good man, I'm stunned, i just adore the shading on the cloak also.
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[proper fuel]

OHMYGOD! I love this!

[Link_omega]

wow isnt a word to apply to this "masterpiece"...

As to critiqueing this I would say that her hand or rather arm look better
with the bracelet and shading to give depth to the deafless.
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[pasakievich]

Keep critiqueing!

Almost there!


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[Marvel]

I'd insert texture to the blade of the weapon and try to define her hands/arms better (especially the right one). Also the skull feels very flat. All in all I'd introduce some complementary color to the picture since currently with only red and gray it feels quite flat. also the more important areas of the picture could be emphasized and some of the gravestones made less obvious (like the ones in the front could be way darker on the backside, blocking things out from the picture, rather than currently taking away attention a bit too much). All in all pretty great job!

[Link_omega]

I'd disagree with Marvel the current setup with the gravestones allow for a more subtle way to rotate the viewers vision around the picture rather than just at a particular part of a picture.
but the tombstone to far left seems a bit to close to the foreground.
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[Lexmir]

This picture is sick, the lighting on the cloak is amazing. Well done

[Duracel]

i like the translucent feeling of the clothes and the skull

But, well, i liked the grainy texture of the right cross in the second version more.
And well, i also liked the statue in the first version - perhaps it doesnt fit in the whole .... but perhaps you made such one in a new picture!

And well, the sythe needs one brace ... or you cannot use it as a scythe.

And Perhaps you place your signature on the right, plane gravestone as a epigraph. This would be really cool.
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