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thor64
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 Posted: Wed Oct 23, 2002 12:48 pm |
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Updated - it's getting better I think. Perhaps you wanna see the previous editions
I have redrawn the teeth and mouth area - not finished of course but I'd rather get your oppinion first. I think the chin needs to be a bit shorter (?) More C&C please.
[ October 23, 2002: Message edited by: thor64 ] |
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Kitamard
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| Posted: Thu Oct 24, 2002 1:21 pm |
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I think your chin is fine.. Butits looking good  |
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B0b
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| Posted: Fri Oct 25, 2002 1:04 am |
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hes not a horse  i'd relook at the shape of his mouth... |
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thor64
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| Posted: Mon Oct 28, 2002 7:56 am |
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ok...
Tinusch send me an email where he pointed out the problems
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| Basically, it seemed like you were going for a slight downward tilt of the head, but not all the features supported that. What I did was lowered the top lip so the upper gums were not so visible, which I think was the cause of the horse look. This made a large gap between his nose and mouth, so I lowered the rest of the face as well. I also added more hair for the back of the head, since it is tilted forward a bit, so more of the top and back should be visible. That's about it, I hope it helps you out a bit. |
So I'll try correcting it soon. Thanx alot Tinusch |
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