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Bare Bonez
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 19, 2002 10:24 am     Reply with quote
Hi, another portrait. Need someone to do an anatomy check on this one. Not too sure about the left shoulder if it's positioned correctly. Thanks.

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parky
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 19, 2002 1:27 pm     Reply with quote
i think you should make her left shoulder more down and add more meat to her body. looks too skinny.
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Simoom
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 19, 2002 1:35 pm     Reply with quote
the circle around the eye kinda scares me.
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JL
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 20, 2002 9:21 pm     Reply with quote
You've chosen a difficult view... Don't know if this helps much, but here is how I'd try to do it:



- Bigger skull, smaller face.
- Far shoulder pretty much hidden.
- Watch the perspective lines in the background.

[ October 20, 2002: Message edited by: JL ]
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Bare Bonez
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 21, 2002 6:51 pm     Reply with quote
Dude, this helps so much! Thanks a ton. Gotta go back and rework the sketch .

I'm aiming towards working my way to three point perspectives, so trying to get the 1 point perspective right.
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