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dr.
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 08, 2002 8:52 am     Reply with quote
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 08, 2002 9:46 am     Reply with quote
First of all you should choose more contrast.
Paint more darker and some very bright areas to give this pic the atmosphere.
The colors are okay - you could add some dark greenish and bluish and the plant (?).
Well the ground...
I think the perspective between this flying guy the plant (?) and the ground is wrong.
I cant't describe it exactly, sorry.

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 08, 2002 10:37 am     Reply with quote
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 09, 2002 10:58 am     Reply with quote
Okay - better now !
The yellow guy is VERY yellow.
You could darken him a bit.
Just my opinion....

Take it easy.
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