[mario36]

Hey guys. My name is Mario and I ran into this forum from the links section at Feng Zhu's website. This forum really kicks some major butt so I thought I'd begin posting some of my artwork for critique. This is a new comic concept that I'm in the middle of developing. Any suggestions? comments?

You can check out the comic homepage here Cyborgtica

-mario


here is a color preliminary that I did for the concept.



[ October 01, 2002: Message edited by: mario36 ]

[Ghosa]

Nice texture on the shoulder protector, but something i dont know what, is not right. I think its the light but i am not sure...

Cheers and welcome to the forum!

[mario36]

thanks. Yea, I'm sure that there are many errors in this one. I didn't have time to completely finish it. The highlights need to be worked on but either way, I can't say that I don't have trouble with defining light sources. Hopefully this project will help me out w/ my coloring problems.

-mario

[Leeloo]

nice pic! i think the lighting is off though...it looks as if the light source is comin from the side for the shoulder pad thing, but from the front for the right arm...doesn't look right.

[Fafnir]

cool sketches, neat concept.

heh, when i looked at cyborgtica, i thought it said cybererotic.

[mario36]

aaah! crap! not good! lol.