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Xyster21
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 Posted: Mon Sep 23, 2002 2:52 am |
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Hey everyone. I haven't been on this forum in a lonnnngggg time. Well, anyhow here is a quick sketch of myself from memory. I don't really have any pictures of myself to post :/ oh well hehe. 
My second image here is something I tried to do very quick. I completed it under an hour give or take a few minutes. 
The tent kinda looks out of proportion and the background on the right is sorta... blah. Any help as of what I can/need/should do? Thanks. |
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Xyster21
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| Posted: Mon Sep 23, 2002 3:12 am |
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Well while I am at it... I will post this old character of mine that took me quite a while to do (original was a pencil sketch). Went back and took a good 15 mins touching things up and the first time (2001) I posted this not many ppl C&C's on it so I am hoping people will see it this time around  . Character's chrystal's provide power to himself and his suit contains it. It explains the eyes glowing in a way and other things some ppl have questioned me as to why I did things as I did . I know I know you are probably thinking he looks so stiff or the anatomy isn't right. This is an old character (a year or older) and I have since revised my way of building up a character  ... (still need improvement tho). Comment away plz
Too bad it's so small... I had people in the hotel windows that sorta just kept me memorized for a while in the background 
I would post more pictures but I don't want to put a whole pile down this topics ( Y ).--- Ok back to C&C... Anyone?
[ September 23, 2002: Message edited by: Xyster21 ] |
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Max
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| Posted: Mon Sep 23, 2002 6:18 am |
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I like your images.
2nd and last !!
You created a nice atmosphere with the background in them.
The background gives them the FLAIR.
cool work |
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Lexmir
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| Posted: Mon Sep 23, 2002 8:23 am |
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| i love the seconds one background. it looks like its a blured but its detailed...its weird i like it |
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jr
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| Posted: Mon Sep 23, 2002 8:32 am |
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| use some reference on the figures,they look too rubbery. the colors are nice. |
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Xyster21
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| Posted: Mon Sep 23, 2002 8:29 pm |
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| Thank you all for the comments and all... I am still working on the clown image but as for the last one... it was old and just a lil retouching but didn't want to do too much since I am not that interested in that particular peice anymore. |
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