[Max E. Tormer]

Here is the current pic i am working on, is a concept drawing for my comic, a scout from the ONU,

feel free to make any comments about it,

[Basement bound]

Sorry man, the red X

[Max E. Tormer]

here is an url to the picture at least

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[xmmx]

You did a nice job on the depth, just need a whole lot of cleaning up to do

[Max E. Tormer]

thanks u are the first one to post some critics, i like to hear opinions so i am very happy i hope to see u around when i finish it.

[Siyaan]

You need to have more surfaces. The Guy looks the best, but like, armor plates, panelling on the ship, in his jet streams, they need to be more filled in. Basically it looks kinda sketchy now without it, kind of wireframe looking. the flame out of his hand might be a little high as well. flame curls and dicipates much faster then that. um.... oh, and in Bright white cursive writing that says, "Wish you were here" Cause him waving makes it look like a postcard, or a picture sent home to mama. No offense! seriously, its a good picture, I like it.

[Max E. Tormer]

I agree, it needs more small detail, of course this is not finished, so �ill take all the sugesstions made into serious consideration, the postcard comment maked me laguth hard and well, maybe i will sell it as a postcard from a planet in "a galaxy far far away".

Thanks for the commets hope to see more of them in the future