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Andromeda
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 Posted: Wed Sep 11, 2002 10:18 am |
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Doing this for some company, who wants to see what i can do ... if im good enough, that company will commision me to do some stuff for them. I hope that company likes it when its done.
Comments and Crtis, please ...
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EviLToYLeT
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| Posted: Wed Sep 11, 2002 11:36 pm |
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good luck. looks great so far  |
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Hunago
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| Posted: Thu Sep 12, 2002 1:04 am |
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Nice character, cool design. I think the grey pencil lines can be inked or coloured to make them look higher quality.
Her right leg and hips look a little awkward. perhaps they are lifted too high?
Look forward to see next stage, and good luck. |
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Andromeda
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| Posted: Thu Sep 12, 2002 5:49 am |
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Thanks all ..
Hunago: .. i know what you mean ... my girlfriend said the same thing ... i will change it when the piece is near completion (theyre all on different layers, im leaving the figure last)
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... I SUCK AT BACKGROUNDSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS !!!!!!!!!! ARRRGHHH !!!
ESPECIALLY WHEN THEY HAVE HOUSES THERE !
AND the TOP of the fountain looks STOOOPID to boot !!!
*kicks myself in the face*
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Andromeda
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| Posted: Thu Sep 12, 2002 7:57 am |
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hey andro, top of fountain looks like a donut ! HUUAAAHAHAHAHAHAHHA !
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Andromeda
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| Posted: Thu Sep 12, 2002 9:45 am |
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No .. i STILL have not corrected the mistakes in Anotomy .. i'll get to it ok !
Dont Rush Me !
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EmKah
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| Posted: Thu Sep 12, 2002 10:05 am |
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why dont you render the bg and paint over it?
the colors are all to close together... you have the skincolor on the houses in the BG leather armor and skin could use more contrast... and i cant say where the light is comming from... somewhere from above but why the face has no shadows on it? Whys a shadow on here left shoulder?
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Andromeda
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| Posted: Thu Sep 12, 2002 10:28 am |
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i see your point with the colors being too close together ... will do something bout it.
render bg ? .... you mean 3d ? .. why didnt i think of that ... shits, i just deleted my 3dmax. =\
as for lightsource, well, the girl has not been touched on since i started(other than the base colors), the shadow you see is just the pencil line.
i think the lightsource will be from the left and front a bit.
you'll get to see the finished work soon enuff =]
and you'll get to crit on the lightsource again, cos i suck at lighting as well. |
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