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Lionel · Posted: Tue Sep 10, 2002 2:11 pm

The picture is off the front of the Telegraph Magazine(can't show you it as I don't have a scanner). Been having a bit of a battle trying to finish it off so any sugestions welcome. Looking at this again it looks like I have streatched the body a bit grrr.

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Effigy · Posted: Tue Sep 10, 2002 3:17 pm

That's very good, the face is a little wide, maybe its just like that.

I think the top of the dress is extemely good, but the creases on her right sleave are a little too sharp and pronounced.

gigatron · Posted: Tue Sep 10, 2002 4:32 pm

Omg, thats sexy in many ways, keep it up

Simoom · Posted: Tue Sep 10, 2002 6:39 pm

That's some crazy hair she has going on. But you got her shape perfect, looks great. Effigy already mentioned all the stuff that should be fixed, so I've got nothing to gripe about. good work

Pickman · Posted: Tue Sep 10, 2002 11:14 pm

Impressive....would like to see the ref-pic too.

NineZero · Posted: Wed Sep 11, 2002 12:36 am

Firstly, that's a marvelous rendition! I love the realistic depiction of wrinkles in her clothing. That's got to be the highlight of the piece.

Only thing that nags at me is that it seems like her shoulders are too far apart. The fact that her right arm is further out accentuates the broadness. It may just be me though... but that's my two CDN cents. Keep up that great work! Can't wait to see the end result.

Shikome · Posted: Wed Sep 11, 2002 2:00 am

Looks YummY

Only thing I can think off (except mentioned) is that the neck seems to "disapear" into her face, to sharp of an angle... If you make the top of the neck wider, it maybe fix the whole thing of wide face wide shoulder, I dont know.
But other then that, thats a tasty looking gal

Lionel · Posted: Wed Sep 11, 2002 2:15 am

Thanks for the replys guys I will try and fix All the various problems tonight.

Effigy: The face has been a bit of a battle ground :/ I gave her a bit of a pee head to start of with. I will try an see if I can tone down the right arm a bit

Simoom: In the pic she has a white vale ove the top of her hair which makes it look a little less crazy (will try and put it in later)

gigatron: Thanks

Pickman: I will see if I can find somewhere to scan the ref pic in.

NineZero: I will try and do something about the sholders kinda like how they turned out so I have been a bit loath to touch them.

Shikome: I cut the top of the neck down a bit so I lost the original top I put in. Thanks for pointing that out I will try and put it back in again.

AndyT · Posted: Wed Sep 11, 2002 4:42 am

I love it and I'd love to see the ref-pic too. I wonder how the left hand is attached to the arm

Lionel · Posted: Wed Sep 11, 2002 2:55 pm

Didn't have time to do to much but have managed to scan the ref in
Reference Photo

I have mad a few alterations and here is hi res version

Girl picture

seems to look worse this big :/

Max · Posted: Thu Sep 12, 2002 6:10 am

Clothing is great.
Hair style is remarkably.