[Toaster]

Im doing this picture to print out so its very very big dpi wise. This is a small section of it that I want some critiques on. I personally don't like it that much... but I need to finish something so I can say I actually can finish something because all of my works that I color like this... are never finished.

Im not satisfied with it... so I need some crits to make it better.



Thanks beforehand.

[ August 24, 2002: Message edited by: Toaster ]

[AndyT]

Seems ok so far...what is it you you don't like?
But why is the one eye green? If you want to keep that maybe that green should appear somewhere else in the picture...
Apart from that just keep adding details...

[Toaster]

Heh actually the the other eye being a different color is one of the few things that I do like =/

[dARCKLOWN]

I like it so far, the face is really smooth nicely done.
Post the finish!

[The Machine God]

I like it too. But I do agree with AndyT. You should try and get that green somewhere else in the pic so it doesn't look so out of place.
It looks like you're going to put some sort of cranium on her. I think you should leave her with an open topped head. I think that would look cool. Maybe put some mechanical bits sticking out like a metal brain or something but nothing to promonent.
And I think there's something wrong with the mouth. I'm not sure. Maybe it just looks to round for me. Maybe I'm wrong.
But over all I like it. Once it's finished put it in the Robot/Mech thread

[Blind Tree Frog]

Perspective looks a little off on the mouth, like it's too fat on the near side and too thin on the other. Might that be waht you don't like?

[Max]

I like it

The smooth, blurry look works great.
I agree with the mouth.
The nose is off.
It's too thin and the tip of the nose should be bigger.
�hh, hard to describe what I mean....doesn't matter

well done so far

- max