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bM · Posted: Wed Aug 21, 2002 3:02 pm

Hey people, i started working on my fourth airbrush image. This is gonna be my entry for the swedish lan called "Dreamhack". Last year we had 5000 visitors at dreamhack and lucky me won the graphic compo

With this one (when finished) i hope to do the same this year..

As you see, im not very good at proportions and such, im gonna use photo references for the head. (I think i will use Britney Spears head

Any tips and errors would be GREAT, as this is just a sketch and will be my guide when i start airbrushing..

SO PLEASE comment on it..
BAD and GOOD Stuff..
TIPS and TRICKS..
SUGGESTIONS :d

Thanks in advance!

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LAST DRAFT HERE.
GO below to see more version
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Draft 3.2

50% original size.

Currently working area: Chest, hair, face.

Sincerely
-bM]

[ August 25, 2002: Message edited by: Nalfaren ]

vegeta�ONAC · Posted: Wed Aug 21, 2002 10:51 pm

thats a real nice drawing, i cant find that much wrong with it, but i do find a few tid bits hehe. First thing that I noticed was the wind direction. I am guessing that there are multiple gust directions from her hair and the banner. It gets a lil confusing with her gown too. will there be a background? thats pretty much the only gripes i have about it, just the realistic aspects of the picture. I like the overall feel, no wonder you won that competition!

Jabo · Posted: Thu Aug 22, 2002 10:55 am

The only glitch I see are her knees! Her right leg (from her view) is in front of her left leg, but it should be the other way 'round! It looks like a big Bump the way it is ATM!

Nice pic, I like it alot, hope you'll win!

bM · Posted: Thu Aug 22, 2002 1:47 pm

thank you both. its realy appreciated..
Im gonna start testing and airbrush the thingie.. and i will have your comments and suggestions in aspect.

bM · Posted: Sat Aug 24, 2002 5:47 am

Here is an 1-2 hour draft on her head.
Much more to fix i know.. i just wanted you to follow the progress.

Who does it look like?
Oh realy.. good then my success is on its way

Sincerely
-bM

bM · Posted: Sun Aug 25, 2002 12:53 pm

Here is the last draft on her head, i just started on the chest, so i know its much to bitch about.

Comments still welcome..

Binke · Posted: Mon Aug 26, 2002 9:16 am

she looked more like britney spears on the pic before that one ^

I think you need to define the planes a bit more, give it some contrast. And i dont think you should concentrate all your power on getting the details down now, better do a rough but correct rendering first.