[xmmx]

the idea here is that she is not actually going to battel but her outfit is more like a ceremonial dress used for royalty when discussing talks of war.
i tried to give a little bit of culture to her but i think i failed anyway you critz are wanted so let me here them thanx.



[ August 20, 2002: Message edited by: xmmx ]

[Leeloo]

Her left breast looks smaller than her right, and it looks funny

[xmmx]

lol is wasn't tell the next morning after i posted it that i noticed how far off that was then i was happy none posted a reply and it sank... but leeloo you just had to revive it didn't you, hehe j/k

[Qwert]

Her left eye looks a little big too, and out of proportion.

[dogfood]

Overall, I think you've got some good things going, such as a coherent overall lighting plan and some decent perspective (often lost on these kind of shots) and an especially nice dispaly of your rendering skills.
There are, however, some issues with the anatomy. The eyes (different sizes are alright within reason) are very different shapes, a bit too large and too close together (a by-product of their size). The mouth will actually wrap around a bit more at this angle and we'd still see her far cheek beyond it. I really like the hair, with the color and highlights.
There is also a problem with the torso, besides the unbalanced chest. It appears to turn toward us, right down to the hips. It's also pretty long.
There is an issue with the arms which is just glaring, though. Though her left upper arm is a little on the long side, her right one disappears at the breast and her forearm is coming out of her pocket! Ow. I must say nice job on the hand we can see. So many people avoid hands.
This is just a preference thing, but those are some big feet.

Her pose is quite stiff and a bit uninteresting. Bridgeman deals with this very well if you could take a look at his life drawing book. Your rendering skills are obviously sizable, but if you could work on your anatomy skills, you'd be very formidable.