[Funk Master Kane]

If you saw my post in the finished art section, I am very sorry. I dont know what I was thinking. with the combination of being tired and lazy at the time I did the pick. I couldnt really see what I had done. it was barely shaded, and cause i put a water efect over him, it looked like there was no shading at all. and the rest of the picture was to horible to speak of. thanks everybody for being truthfull abou it.

Now feeling better and not as lazy. keeping the critz I got from the last post in mind I have gone back and started working on it again. So far I have fixed the eyes (stillworking on them. and have started reshading the face, which I am still working on.

Wakka Redo

as always critz, and comments are welcome. as soon as I have progressed a little farther with my pic ill have an update.

[Fuchs]

Ok. Your ability to color is fine. I think the problem at hand is the drawing. You have a nice pose going, but you are neglecting some key issues. I dont know who the character is, so I cant comment on that. But a little bit of build up in his muscle structure, a little nicer and more defined use or perspective and shading also. Its clear that you know hoe to make your lines, but the structure is just off. Keep working on it, and sorry about that Ancient Jerk who flamed you. I think the angle of the chest is off more than anything.

[Funk Master Kane]

well the thing is with the chest, kinda ment to draw it that way, but not to that extent, you see since his left arm is drawn back and the right side of his body is closer that side aof the chest is supposed to be smaller, I think i made the closer one to big. soill scale that down a bit. I dont want to make the other side bigger cause then he would be too buff. The mucles will look better once I shad them.

Thanks Fuchs. Your right about the drawing. Id have to say the same thing as I did with my shading. I rushed it. Ill make sure Im calm and relaxed and patient before I start my next work, i seem to have a tendancy to rush things. I probably have been good at CG for a long time, but never really focused on my work

ok enough bable. Here is how it has progressed now. I still need to smooth out the shading of his skin, and make a little more definition, as well as shading the rest of him.

Wakka update

[Funk Master Kane]

Well....? i need to have this pic done in the next few days. please comment

[Funk Master Kane]

well here is how far I have come. is there any critz or comments you have about the character before I go ahead and do the background? If you have them please post them.

wakka part 3

[Dekard]

I think the image is good, but you seem to have a dynamic pose going on which is good but doesn't look dynamic, possibly from another angle? I mean the composition is good but you need a good dynamic pose, you can't see a working action line through the character.. Good stuff though!

[oDD]

much better, try to shade his leg to look more round like you did his chest.