[Superbug]

These aren't any Enayla pics since she's so awesome, but weee, here we go.



My anatomy seems all 'effed' up.

Cheers beers

[dogfood]

There is a very raw, harsh feel to this piece that appeals to me. I like the near-juxtaposition of the rough lines describing the soft scene.

Actually, your anatomy isn't all that off, with the notable exception of... that... ear. Her eyes are a little freaky, but that ear; it just stares at you, piercing into the very depths of your soul, eeking out the little evil truths you've been coveting, gnawing at the open nerve endings of your spiritual molars, knowing, knowing everything. It knows you, it knows all about you. It's an ear, but it... sees.

ahem.

I'd think about reworking the hands, as well, putting them in a different position (the fingers are a little akward, like that first day of high school, after you realize your mom pinned a big yellow nametag to your ger-animals shirt). Also, thighs that large don't generally disappear into the back without a much larger tuckus supporting them. We would at least see more jutting out from the far buttock, due to her back giving us a little angle. You are giving us the hint of the far breast, but with the eye level at the shoulder, we woudn't be able to see it.

There are a couple other things, like you say, but nothing that makes it horrid. I'd love to show a couple of the things I'm talking about, but I'm away from all of my stuff. Hopefully later, if you're game.

But, please... the ear.

[gigatron]

Very interesting Elf character, I like it Not anime yet not realism a somewhat unique cartoony style is how i see it and hmm i really love it :X Personally I just think the arms are hanging too much just a personal opinion though

[ August 02, 2002: Message edited by: gigatron ]

[Superbug]

The ear.......the ear.....my god........it's all making sense now.

her ear is actually like on her cheek...for the love of god noooo...

thanks