[gArGOyLe^]

Sad that its my best work so far.. but i'm happy that i'm progressing..

Comments and Crits pleeeeez..

btw I still have to add her teeth and lots of other stuff..

what do you think?

[cptoonz]

Well, take it easy on yourself, everybody had to start somewehre

Anyway, from this angle I don't think her clavicles would be visible, and they seem a bit large...now, I get the impression the figure is looking up at us, as we look down, perhaps her clavicles are visible, in that case, but you need to "deepen" her shoulders a bit, I would think. The iris/pupils of her eyes seem a little small to me. Overall it is a nice CG painting (I am assuming its CG), and she is definitely a vampire. Her facial structure is good overall. Good work

[gArGOyLe^]

Thanks cptoonz

I'll do what you suggested thanks again..