Sijun Forums :: View topic - crossbow chick-WIP (C&C)

DeathJester · Posted: Thu Jul 04, 2002 2:04 am

WOrking on a concept.. not sure if I like it.. any crits welcome..

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FSME · member Member # Joined: 25 Jun 2002 Posts: 70 Location: UK

There is something wrong with her torso but I can't really but my finger on it. I think the left shoulder (on the left side of the pic) is too sharp-edged and the shoulders in general are too wide. And now my browser is totally screwed. I'll restart and continue.

Ok, I'm back. Her right breast goes up too high. Even if they're supposed to look huge, breasts normally start lower and are more "U-" shaped than an "O" without top (if you know what I'm saying

).
The crossbow is cool but why is she aiming at her foot (just wondering)?
Still, I'd like to see a final version here...

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eyewoo · Posted: Thu Jul 04, 2002 6:09 am

Her right arm appears to be smaller than her left arm...

Mag82 · Posted: Thu Jul 04, 2002 6:43 am

I think she's aiming at her foot to strain the crossbow's string.
Nice hips!

xbs · Posted: Thu Jul 04, 2002 9:25 am

just a little word.... the left foot must be ON the crossbow to be able to draw on the "rope"... there's usually a handle to put the feet in...

DeathJester · Posted: Thu Jul 04, 2002 1:32 pm

Hey thanks everyone... I deffinitly see the flaws now... and especially with the cross bow... my friend use to have one and you are right you stand on it.. and pull up.. instead of puss down and pull up... *goes back to the drawing board*

Thanks again.