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Vertigoblack
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 Posted: Fri Jun 21, 2002 6:25 pm |
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hered a sketch im doing now...i havent settled on a pose yet(i know i know) i work kinda backwards...anyways, gimme some crits and comments ok  http://www.geocities.com/moogooboy/anime2.jpg
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manofsuede
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| Posted: Fri Jun 21, 2002 8:06 pm |
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pose seems to be coming along nicely....
her face is looking good, but her breasts look a bit funky, morely her right breast, that size and shape doesn't really seem to fit anime very well. does she have something covering her mouth? like a bandana? or a turtle neck sweater.
oh yeah by the way don't link to geocities, we have to go through the drudgery of copying and pasting..... we deserve better.
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Basement bound
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| Posted: Fri Jun 21, 2002 10:05 pm |
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| To me all looks good execpt the upper torso area some how I think it should be wider around her upper back. Otherwise clean it up and colour the babe. |
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zak
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| Posted: Sun Jun 23, 2002 5:44 am |
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| yeh man, fix the boobs, they dont look too neat, but i love the face. *big grin* |
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Mr. T
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| Posted: Sun Jun 23, 2002 6:13 am |
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sorry... i had to  |
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Vertigoblack
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| Posted: Sun Jun 23, 2002 8:38 am |
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| lol...mmhmm |
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