[Zorglub]

Ok I posted this one that other forum as well but I need help really bad so I thought I'd post here as well...
I'm always trying to teach myslef to be better at this digital painting thing and I need your help. I'm coloring a sketch of this girl and I'm pretty happy with it so far, but I can still feel that it's missing a lot. It is a work in progress but I'd still like as many comments and suggestions as you can think of. I'd especially like comments on how to make the torso, arms and breast(s) seem more realistic. Well here's the picture, and don't spare my feelings. If you were doing this picture what is the next thing you would do, what is the first mistake you would correct?
Oh by the way, ignore the strange highlight on the boob and the fact that she has no face

[Zorglub]

*cough* bump *cough*

[Zorglub]

I'm getting pissed I get no respect I tells ya

Here's an update with the pencil sketch layered on top...

[lel]

I'm almost quoting another thread I think, but those where good words and should be repeated.
Problem: Monochromatic and limited range.
Solution: Creative colouring and contrast.
I don't know anatomy, so I pass on that (but it looks quite ok to me).

[ June 22, 2002: Message edited by: lel ]

[Zorglub]

Thanks lel, I'll try to use some more yellowish tones and just vary the spectrum a bit to spice up the picture...
Thanks for answering again..getting a reply here is lke pulling out teeth.