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eBoy
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 Posted: Fri Jun 14, 2002 4:29 pm |
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(noooot! just wanted to get your attention ;-)
Hi all...
I've looked too long at this piece and need some fresh eyes to slack it or to give me suggestions on how to improve the colours and the lightsituation.
(The persons are SUPPOSED to have purple, blue and green clothes... I didn't choose that ;-)
I think it have all turned out way too... poppish?! it IS aimed at teenagers, but still... way too much is going on!
Anyway... would appreciate some uncensored comments!
Cheers.
eBoy
character closeup here > http://www.lime.dk/board/previews/master_closeup.jpg
also posted at lumental
[ June 17, 2002: Message edited by: eBoy ] |
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Torstein Nordstrand
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| Posted: Tue Jun 18, 2002 2:32 am |
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Hm, I'm not really good enough to find flaws here, but maybe you could find an even better way to bring the main figures forward? Right now they are as dark as the background, so maybe make them lighter, or make the background lighter? I'm not sure, but right now the picture seems divided in two pieces, one light (top) and one dark (bottom) and I'm not sure if that's a good idea.
But I really don't know design, so don't listen to me if it feels right  |
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Basement bound
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| Posted: Tue Jun 18, 2002 3:59 pm |
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| I am not sure why, but the faces are throwing me off. I looked at the close up and they look good there ..... *racking brain* |
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eBoy
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| Posted: Wed Jun 19, 2002 5:40 am |
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thanks for the crits guys... this is the final piece
Cheers
eBoy
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Svanur
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| Posted: Wed Jun 19, 2002 6:10 am |
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The only thing I find weird is the right eye of the guy in the front. Maybe it's intentional or not, just find it a bit eery 
Just keep going at it. |
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eBoy
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| Posted: Wed Jun 19, 2002 6:29 am |
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OMG you'r so right!?! why didn't I see that... argh... I was just about posting it to the client... thank you so much! ... this is the final correction
cheeeeers!
eBoy
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Tinusch
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| Posted: Wed Jun 19, 2002 7:06 am |
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| If you haven't submitted it already, the only other possible correction that I see is the fog on the bottom. I think it should gradually fade up over the characters' legs, rather than having them stop abruptly, as they do with the woman on the left. |
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V Shane
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| Posted: Wed Jun 19, 2002 6:07 pm |
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I recommend putting in a NAKED SLIPPERY AND FOXY female.
Otherwise great! |
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