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landmaster
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 Posted: Thu May 23, 2002 1:17 pm |
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All of these are skecthes and works for a book I'm working on..-_-
Gods of art, please help me..
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Asurfael
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| Posted: Thu May 23, 2002 3:35 pm |
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| I'm definately not a god of art, and I don't think I can be of assistance with those, but I just thought you still might want to know that I like these... very much. |
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BloodStone
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| Posted: Thu May 23, 2002 5:19 pm |
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Not bad at all, Gali. Actually, I love these  |
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landmaster
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| Posted: Fri May 24, 2002 8:29 am |
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O_O...
BloodStone means Dioptase!
I'm discovered!
Looks like I've to change to a different board......
heheh...nah!
Thanks but a little critique wont hurt -_-.... |
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Mr. T
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| Posted: Fri May 24, 2002 9:53 am |
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cool stuff.
you should work on drawing the ear, and hands too |
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jdillon
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| Posted: Fri May 24, 2002 10:07 am |
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Well, I think it would help if we knew what exactly you wanted help with. Personally, I think these all look really nice. I like your shading and your linework. The anatomy overall looks good, though it's a little weak on the final picture. Aside from that, I'm not sure what you are looking for. ^^; If you could be more specific, and let us know why exactly you're concerned (because overall, this is good stuff) I'd be happy to write something up for you and help out as best I can.  |
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landmaster
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| Posted: Sun May 26, 2002 9:38 am |
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Well, I'd like to know
1) Does the composition color come across
2) is the anatomy okay(ears and hands, check!)
3)How's the style?
Mainly I'd like to know how you guys feel about these... |
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Svanur
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| Posted: Sun May 26, 2002 10:14 am |
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All those pics except the last two are cool and shows a certain style that I like, the last one is a bit weird anatomically, his stomach muscles are rather small, the profile picture on the second last one is good because you get a good mood over the face with the other half of it hidden in the shadow, the lower half is a bit psychadelic and I ain't really getting what it's telling.
I hope this helps some what. I like your style and your faces are Mangaish with a touch of Korean in it. Keep it up. |
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