[[Optima]]

Well this is my 3rd offical wacom image, I know its not that great but I would like to finish it.

Anyway I am just plaing around with the Photoshop 7 brushes. I was wondering what you think of the composition and how I could make it better.

As you can tell the creature is not done on the side as well as the 3 characters that are suppose to be there are not done. I am unsure about the whole composition.

Your help is apreciated. Thanks.

[tek9z]

i like the way you've done the grass and tree
-as for the compostion:
maybe you could add some more space around
the characters or tell something more about the background-
made a little paintover here

[Asurfael]

the perspective of the bridge appears to be off, at least in my eyes. it should probably be portrayed more from the side. great job otherwise. I love the grass. Did you use some custom brush for it or was it just normal brush, straw by straw.. or is that the ps7 grass brush? Yea I suck at telling things like that...

[[Optima]]

Thank you for the comments.. they are great.

The composition lacks allot, as well as there is to many variation of the color it gives me this childbook look to it. Which I do not like to much.

Yes that is the grass brush from Ps7, I controlled the rotation of the grass with the tilt of the wacom pen .. i like it The bring is a little off.. I agree..

Thanks again